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Post by angietrafford on May 2, 2016 12:04:27 GMT -6
Any criticism is welcome...  |
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Post by Felicia Hf on May 2, 2016 12:15:19 GMT -6
Wow, that is one powerful tale! I love the imagery in this and I wonder what happened that made him stab her...? The words have been perfectly chosen - I can't think of a single that I would change! It's beautifully simple and yet there's a certain deeper ring to it. Congrats!!  |
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Post by angietrafford on May 2, 2016 12:36:54 GMT -6
Wow, that is one powerful tale! I love the imagery in this and I wonder what happened that made him stab her...? The words have been perfectly chosen - I can't think of a single that I would change! It's beautifully simple and yet there's a certain deeper ring to it. Congrats!! I don't know why he did it! I was listening to Nick Cave, the wild rose at the time... Seems less original now, LOL! But thanks for the lovely words.  |
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Post by The Voice on May 2, 2016 16:17:40 GMT -6
That's awesome, Angie! I agree with Felicia. I wouldn't change a thing.  |
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Post by angietrafford on May 3, 2016 2:26:04 GMT -6
That's awesome, Angie! I agree with Felicia. I wouldn't change a thing. Thank you very much! |
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